forum Critique my angry boi who is possibly an Anti-Sue??

Started June 08, 2018 by @WriteOutofTime

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Took a Mary Sue quiz and ended up with a -1 score lol. Now I'm thinking my main character is a bit boring. I did alter him some, but I don't know…. please help! Tasper: Tasper Heol

I don’t think he’s an Anti-Sue. He seems very complex and well thought out. I suggest trying another Mary Sue quiz and seeing how he scores on that one.

Your character looks great! Here's some advice though: don't worry about your characters being sues. If You are concerned about it, chances are they are probably not sues. It's important to develop the characters the way you want them, and not preoccupy yourself with the fear of the sue singularity.

He looks great! A very interesting character!
Where did you find the test? I'd love to use it.

@That_One_Purple_Owl_that's_into_Sci-Fi Thanks! @AJ posted the test on a different thread, here it is http://www.springhole.net/writing/marysue.htm

Interesting test. I barely cleared the 'safe range'.