forum Critique for critique?
Started by @jantz
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@Zandra2119

Alice looks really good! The only thing I can think of is translating the Greek into English as well so we know what it means. Perhaps how to pronounce the Greek as well

@jantz

Thanks :)
I might add some sort of translation. Is there anyone you want me to critique for you?

@Kinarymo

Oooh, i really like her :0 she's very detailed and well written (also, her backstory is quite interesting :')) ). I cant seem to find anything wrong with her so good job! o3o
As for me, would u mind taking a look at one of these 2 bois? (you can pick one or both, doesn't matter)
Rin —> Rynn
Avatar –> Tierlan

@jantz

Oooh, i really like her :0 she's very detailed and well written (also, her backstory is quite interesting :')) ). I cant seem to find anything wrong with her so good job! o3o
As for me, would u mind taking a look at one of these 2 bois? (you can pick one or both, doesn't matter)
Rin —> Rynn
Avatar –> Tierlan

There's not really anything I can find wrong or out of place with either of these characters. Rin's a little emotionless but I guess he's supposed to be that way. Keep up the good work and I really love you're art style :))