forum Criticize My Character so Far!
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tune

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@Kie group

I'm currently trying to plan a story based on Wonderland, with references to the book here and there. I wanted to start with a character who I thought would be somewhat important.

So, I present to you: Teddi, who is based on Dormouse.

I tried to make some references to Dormouse, but don't know if they're too much. Please let me know if there's currently anything I could change or go more in-depth with! More will be added to her later.