@MarDeColores this is not it kids
Feel free to tell me what I need to improve, and what looks good.
Feel free to tell me what I need to improve, and what looks good.
He does seem a bit skinny/light-weighted to me for a 5,8 male, but that really could just be because he's a god or abilities.
Love the bone-beads detail!
The blocker-ring; is that an actual ring? how does it work and how does he activate it? I do love the concept, it sounds like a sci-fi but also modern thing.
Talents and magic kind of sounds like Loki ;) but it's nice, may be nice to know if he likes what he's doing and why.
Flaws are great! Original, strong. They are big flaws though, maybe think of a small flaw like hates drinking water or shuts people out.
Like that the raven is a woman! the dove is a nice thing to add, I personally love it when people do this (I personally have a embodiment of death and coincidence in my story).
Cute character art, also really love the longer braids he has.
No bad things, really fleshed out, except for his personality. Maybe write down some good things about him, some bad/grey things and some random things like maybe he hates a certain plant or whatever.
Thanks for the advice! I'll be sure to add that.
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