forum Could someone review/critique my protagonist?

Started September 11, 2018 by @Cassiopeia

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The main theme of the project my character will be leading is Harmony vs. Discord.

Please be as brutal as you'd like, I want to make this character appealing. After all, this will be the girl you'll be rooting for.

I'll take a look at her.
Her weight is I think average, which is great cause a lot of characters on here are underweight.
Are her eyes naturally violet, does she wear contacts or is it something else?
How come you can see the veins?

This could be because I'm Dutch, but what does dubble-jointed mean and how does this affect your character? The beauty mark is a nice fact, does it have a particular shape?

Love how you added the clothing style, it seems really cute. Maybe mention the main colours?
Where do her fears come from? Are they random or is there more meaning behind it.
I loveee how extended all the mannerisms and put those in categories!
Is the stuffed toy from her animal or a newer one?
Motivations are great, do they have an origin? Love the prejudices.
How come she struggles with decicions and self esteem?

Hobbies are great, very original. Astrology is a great and uncommon hobby.
Why doesn't she associate with religion?
Her background is great, she's well-rounded. I'd absolutely love this character!

@Nouc Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll be sure to get all the things you mentioned ironed out. :)