forum Could somebody please take a look at my character pair?
Started by Another
tune

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i have a few notes,
you say Aaron is uncomfortable around adults, i feel like you can explane a little bit more about these, like what makes him uncomfortable around adults, is it that he feels like they dont really understand? or something else.

and for Nicki what makes him a compulsive liar, why he is pessimistic, and why does he want to get out of hatch? from my understanding of your charactors hatch is a placewith strict rules and away from nature so im sensing something very distopian about these charactors too.

Another

Alright, those are things I should fill in.
Aaron is uncomfortable with adults since most of the adults in Hatch are very religious and cultlike. They disturb Aaron.
Nicki is a compulsive liar because he's always keeping secrets and coming up with excuses from Hannah that its basically second nature to him. His pessimistic nature comes from the way he was raised. Closed off and not allowed to socialize with others outside of school and church.
Yep, Hatch is quite a place.
Thanks for the points.