forum Could anyone take a look at one of my characters?
Started by Rory
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@sharkfinn_ey

I already started loving this character by the time I read mannerisms!
it is litteraly my goal to look chill and confident without being arrogant/cocky (great for your self-esteem, really).
Why does she like to make people's days? does it make her feel good or does she struggle herself and want others to feel good?
Whatever reason I love it when people do that.

In motivations you mention 'without her grandmother's influence', does this mean she's not on good terms with her or wants to be better/do so without help?
Flaws fit perfectly (in my opinion) with the mannerism section. She seems like she cares a lot about things around her.
Though laughing at things that may seem silly/weak etc wouldn't make her a great therapist in my opinion (take it from someone whose been told it was silly and weak to feel that way by a therapist).

Personality type is great! maybe add some things she loves to do/wear etc! She has a lot of best friends, to which I'd normally say 'average person has 1/2 best friends', maybe that's something to look into.
It's a great thing that your universe has so many characters though! I always find it hard to find a place for everybody haha.
By religion maybe explain how voodoo affects her day to day life and how she exactly practices it.

She's a very rounded character and I'd love to have her as my friend! The name moreau even sounds a bit witchy/voodoo in my opinion.
Maybe add some more details like preferred clothing and hairstyle, but I think besides that she's ready

Rory

Thanks very much! She isn't an actual therapist just to clarify, she just generally seems to have her stuff together and people come to her for advice.