forum Check out my character, please
Started by @ImTryingOkayGuys
tune

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@SaltedHam™

Hello! I decided to drop by and take a look and I mainly just have one question on something I noticed, does she see herself as evil? You mentioned that "She firmly believes that anyone who kills another person is evil," but brought up in the occupation that she is an assassin. Other than that she seems really cool!! A little more detail might help later on when writing her, but her character is nicely developed. Hope this helped and doesn't sound too rude! I think your friends and teacher would love to see her and might be able to give more feedback.

@stargirl-3213

I think she sounds awesome. I think she's pretty well-rounded, but there's always room for improvement. Personally, I can't find anything you would need to improve or fix, I think she's perfect the way she is. Keep up the fantastic work!!!

@ImTryingOkayGuys

@SaltedHam™ sorry the whole assassin but not an assassin thing is kinda weird/confusing. She cons people out of their money by offering to kill a target, but then she'll just relocate the target to a place where no one will find them. Probably not the best business practice, but it works. It's also a part of the premise for the story at this point, even though I can't remember how she ended up with that as a profession.