forum Characters in Development

Started August 19, 2019 by @Space group

tune

Help each other develop characters

Anyone who needs help or want to help me with character development, personality, and details have come to the right place.

Could you help me with my character?

Sure thing, I'd love to help

Just tell me what you need help with

Help with details about the character's personality please

Well to explain why he's antisocial and a bit rude he should have something sad in his back story. Are there any mean kids in Hatch? You can have them make fun of Nicholas because of his Vitiligo

That could also be another reason he'd want to run away.

You can make him be sarcastic also. Do you have anything specific you want me to focus on about his personality?

Well it's actually because he was raised all closed in by the church. And his rudeness comes from spite against the orderly church life. I should probably explain that in the personality page. There wasn't anything specific, I was just looking for an overall opinion on anything that needed fixing or more detail. Thanks!

Yeah, I think you're good. The character plan is well thought out, good job.