forum Character Update- @Cinnamonroll Please Check!!
Started by Claire
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@CinnamonRoll

OK FIRST OFF I AM SCREAMING I FEEL SO HONORED AHHHHH

Ok! Here~we~goooo~~~~!!

Awesome work in the personality section!! I would definitely add that ALTHOUGH she is aggressive/manipulative, she is super soft with her cub (I'm assuming). Like, she can still be aggressive for sure, but just note that~!

YESSS!!! I love how the magic ties in–love! It! However, I do notice that you've left a few fields empty. This is a bit of a personal thing, but I find that filling out all the fields really helps you get to know your character–especially the ones that you don't want to fill out. It forces you to think deeper about your character. ESPECIALLY politics. I always rate my characters on a scale of liberal-ness, just so that I know how they would deal with societal issues. It helps, weirdly enough.

Okay, backstory is WAY better. It explains a lot of her prejudices and stuff, but it doesn't really explain her aggressive nature. Nothing happens in a vacuum–those aggressive feelings have to come from somewhere. Put it down!! You tied in most of the other things quite nicely. :)

One ~last~ question–Is Crescent female? You put down 'she' in the history blip. If (he/she) is female, then I'm just wondering how Kekkan was concieved.

I hope this helps you!!! :DDD

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE SHOUTOUT!! I'M SO HONORED!! :DDDDD

Claire

Aha! My friend asked me the same question about Crescent! Well, Crescent was born male, but likes to identify as a female. Also- I'm having trouble with the politics part, because everybody in this story literally lives on an icy planet in a forest. There really aren't any politics, and since these characters are animal hybrids they don't have any pets. . .

@CinnamonRoll

Cool! Okay, so that more or less clears that up. When it comes to politics, that's why I use my liberal scale. Basically, it's "How open is this character to change?" and I feel as if that sums up their 'politics' quite nicely. And ah, pets. I've never minded that one as much as politics. Putting down how liberal a character is really helps you understand them!!