forum Character help

Started January 18, 2018 by @Celestial-B

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Can someone please check my character and make sure she is realistic and everything makes sense? I went over it like 7 times but sometimes you just miss stuff lol

Thank you!

She sounds interesting, but I'm not sure protecting her loved ones fits in with the whole 'distrustful of everyone' thing, or at least, not as a sole motivation. And i don't think the death of her brother would be enough to make her distrustful. Perhaps if she discovered some secret about her brother after he died perhaps? Like he was involved in drugs or something? just a thought.

WOW! What a stellar character! First off, the name Trinity is so amazing and unique! Looks are well-detailed and believable. Motivation is well-rooted.
I really want to highlight how much of a fan I am of her flaws and prejudices! They are extremely realistic based on her past, and very personally relatable. I can tell that they were beautifully thought out, so major kudos to you for that. The way it all flows together makes your character feel extremely real.
Archers are always badass. Always. I'm starting to really love this character :D.
Overall, you were very thorough. Trinity is fantastic. I'd say you're all set!

Thank you both! And sorry if I wasn't clear on there @Tarrant_Korrin But she is distrustful because she had been taken advantage of a lot! Again thank you!