forum Character Development & Critiques
Started by @JonaGaming
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@JonaGaming

I'm trying to add in all my characters into here, and I would love a bit of critiquing and development ideas (like questions to get my thoughts going), considering most of my characters aren't developed too deeply. (I'm too lazy to add in links and the fact that I have a lot of characters so I'd rather not have to add (a) new link(s) every day or every few days to keep this updated, if that makes sense?

@boat boy

I looked at your Alaska character and I'm assuming you're using assigned gender in the first section and then when they identify as (you have "Female; Agender (they/them)" in their gender section). I know the whole thing is for your benefit while using this character but it would be better to write "AFAB" (assigned female at birth) so that you aren't implying that their gender is still female even though you indicate they are agender. The other thing is that you use she/her pronouns for them on their history page.

@JonaGaming

I looked at your Alaska character and I'm assuming you're using assigned gender in the first section and then when they identify as (you have "Female; Agender (they/them)" in their gender section). I know the whole thing is for your benefit while using this character but it would be better to write "AFAB" (assigned female at birth) so that you aren't implying that their gender is still female even though you indicate they are agender. The other thing is that you use she/her pronouns for them on their history page.

Oh oops, I tend to do that a lot, I'll fix it.