forum Character Critiques for my Character Genin?
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@LiteralCyborg group

I like him!
He does seem like another "edgy rebel teen fighting the government" type, so maybe do some work with his personality to make him more unique. I also love the "edgy guy has ONE thing he's soft for", whether that's a person or an animal or, like, a movie franchise, is up to you!
I think working on the personality is the most important hing at the moment, but he has serious potential!

@K14N language

I like him!
He does seem like another "edgy rebel teen fighting the government" type, so maybe do some work with his personality to make him more unique. I also love the "edgy guy has ONE thing he's soft for", whether that's a person or an animal or, like, a movie franchise, is up to you!
I think working on the personality is the most important hing at the moment, but he has serious potential!

Ooh! Thanks for the Feedback! I like the ideas, Ill try some unique things, because I really want to see how unique I can make him.

@tay_sweetwriter group

Sounds like someone I would want to be friends with!
I love characters that are on the side where no one really knows what they are going to do next, "edgy bad boy"
I also really like how he looks haha :)
Yeah I agree that maybe you should make his personality or something maybe that happened in his past that was traumatic and made him how he is now. Could be the reason for how he reacts to thinks also.

@K14N language

Sounds like someone I would want to be friends with!
I love characters that are on the side where no one really knows what they are going to do next, "edgy bad boy"
I also really like how he looks haha :)
Yeah I agree that maybe you should make his personality or something maybe that happened in his past that was traumatic and made him how he is now. Could be the reason for how he reacts to thinks also.

Im Loving these ideas and this support! If you think of anything unique tell me!

@LiteralCyborg group

I think that the worst way to handle a bad boy character is to make him hate everybody all the time.
It's fine if he has trust issues, but It would be best to see him with friends at some point. And when he does get there, PLEASE don't make him be mean to his squad. I hate it when the edge ruins relationships, so maybe have him put down his guard around the people he loves! LET HIM BE SOFT ONCE IN A WHILE.

@K14N language

I think that the worst way to handle a bad boy character is to make him hate everybody all the time.
It's fine if he has trust issues, but It would be best to see him with friends at some point. And when he does get there, PLEASE don't make him be mean to his squad. I hate it when the edge ruins relationships, so maybe have him put down his guard around the people he loves! LET HIM BE SOFT ONCE IN A WHILE.

I didn't plan to make him that way, It's so common to see a 'hate everyone' type that I wanted to be unique. Genin is my attempt at that. :))

@LiteralCyborg group

I think that the worst way to handle a bad boy character is to make him hate everybody all the time.
It's fine if he has trust issues, but It would be best to see him with friends at some point. And when he does get there, PLEASE don't make him be mean to his squad. I hate it when the edge ruins relationships, so maybe have him put down his guard around the people he loves! LET HIM BE SOFT ONCE IN A WHILE.

I didn't plan to make him that way, It's so common to see a 'hate everyone' type that I wanted to be unique. Genin is my attempt at that. :))

Hell yeah! Give! Him! Layers!