forum Character Critiques!

Started September 27, 2018 by @shiiaa

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Hello! Link me characters you would like me to critique! Only characters you own.

Heyo! Here's my boi, he's only been through one minor critique so please be brutal and don't hold back :)

Howdy, this is my OC Vival. Please feel free to be brutally honest, and take your time, I'm in no rush :3

@"Aloe Vera" He actually seems to be pretty well thought out. Though in some parts your grammar does lack, and in bios, it is best to refrain from referring to yourself.

@PookaDooka The character seems to be unoriginal in some places, such as her "Other Names" and your grammar could be better. Though she is pretty nice, just needs some work.

Please could you critique my character? Pundrion Tandriss

Thank you very much @shiiaa!