forum Character Critiques

Started September 19, 2018 by Blue Duck

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Hello Everybody!

For those of you from our old forum, welcome back! For those of you who are new, welcome in general! We are a team of four English students who love sharing our experiences, mistakes and advice to others. When you leave us a character, you will be receiving three separate opinions from different team members. These are strictly our opinions, so don;t feel obligated to change anything. We offer no time frame, but promise to respond as soon as possible. Sorry in advance if we destroy your character, or seem too harsh.

Happy writing!

-The Blue Duck Team

Would you mind taking a look at Blake? Please be as harsh as you'd like!

Can you critique my character? Be as harsh as you want, she'd want you to be.
https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/602666#!

Hello! I've submitted a character to your old forum, so I'm not sure if I'm allowed to submit another, but I might as well try, haha

Muchos gracias de antemano :)

Can you please critique my charaters? Be harsh :-)

Well, I might as well before you guys get buried even further in requests!

Hey, when you guys get a chance, I'm in no rush, could you please help me with my girl? I would really appreciate it. Thank you!

Hey! Could you possibly review one of my side characters? Thanks

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If you could look at this guy: Solua Sevynne it would be super helpful!!
No worries if you can't…
Thanks and have a great day!

if you have time do you think you could look at Arthur here for me?

could you do Zoe Grace? Zoe Grace Iero

The following are re-submissions from your original forum:

Jason (new and improved): Jason Oliver Flayme

Levi: Levi Darker

Lux: Lux Tenebris

William: William Wallace Wintergrean