forum Character critique? Pleeeeease, Madame Gazelle?

Started March 29, 2019 by @tuchisbutt_supreme

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Alrighty. I'm writing a sort of parody furry webcomic type of thing, and I… I really just want advice. I can't tell if I'm overdoing the "parody" aspect of it, and making the Teen Titans Go of furry webcomics; or if I'm not adding enough satire and it just looks like another generic bad webcomic by a bunch of high-schoolers with too much free time.

Thanks bigly!
-BEEF LIP'Z

Ech. Sorry I don't have much on here for you to critique yet. I noticed my Charahub stuff had been suplexed into oblivion and now I'm here.

go onto my forum and called Character Analysis (it's near the top) and I'll analyze and critique just about anything> I'm pretty smart and have years work of background knowledge on these topics. You can cheek my replays if you don't believe me.