forum Character critique

Started July 11, 2018 by @n o s t r a d a m u s location_city

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Attack my softboy

Okay, here goes:

1. Is Micheal a typo? Normally Michael is spelt with the vowels the other way around, and I wanted to check.
2. As the spouse of a 6'4" guy, I can confirm the hunchy walk "because everyone is shorter than him" and the "basketball because he's tall". :D Does Jer also have a hunchy slouch when he sits down?
3. Flaws: I have no idea what you mean by chronic fairy-lander and waspoid. Perhaps you could flesh these out a little?
4. I'd like to know a bit more about his personality - what pisses him off, and is it easy to do so? Does he hold grudges or forgive easily? Is he focused, or distracted? I imagine he's clever with his words of sass - is he equally clever with compliments/flirting/other stuff?
5. Some more information on what atom manipulation is - and especially how Jer uses it - would be helpful. How does he feel about his powers? How does he use them? What makes them his weapon of choice?
6. What's he studying at Waite? Is it the same thing as everyone else (like high school) or did he get to pick his course of study (like uni)?

I find the history of Waite intriguing. Do the newcomers to the town pick up the razium-induced powers the others have? And how many folks are in that jail? I feel like it must be tricky keeping people with atom manipulation locked up!