forum Character Critique?
Started by Rory
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@Some Ink is Needed

Wow, she's definitely not your average gal. Lilith seems murderous and bone-chilling, which I think is the point you were trying to get across. I was wondering, though- does she have a tail or horns? Most tales about demons do, and I didn't see anything that confirmed or denied it.
Another thing I saw- She despises humans because their life-spans are so short. I can see why she'd think humans are weak, ridiculous, etc., but why does she hate them for it? Because they manage to accomplish things anyway? Or something else?
Personally, I don't hate flies because their life-spans are short. I dislike them because they're annoying and fly in my face even though there's a world of space. Is that how she views humans?
I would also like to say that the name Lilith is awesome because it sounds sweet but isn't.