She's a bit of a minor antagonist at the start of my story, but later goes on to be an absolute queen. SO rip her to shreds:
He's sweet and means well, but is sometimes a little clueless, and a tad underdeveloped I know: Invalid Character
She's blatantly neurotic, a super genius, and been on this forum before:
Have some fun, and I always appreciate a fun response so get creative, ROAST them better than my nan's Sunday roast.
REBECCA:
-I like her name. Well, because I'm Rebecca too lol.
-OKay, she seems pretty realistic and interesting. Her backstory is really good, very realistic.
-I like that she is ambitious and it seems that she swore to herself to not end up like her mother and worked her butt off to be successful, I admire that.
-She also seems to have an old soul underneath her cold exterior, which I think is great!
-The thing about not liking overly cheery people, why? Because she doesn't like it when others are happy because she isn't or…something else?
-Also, why pigeons? Yes, they're underrated, so does she like them because they're sort of an underdog or it's a rare favorite animal so she likes them?
-Also, does she have a type of humor or is she just plain notfunny-cold person? I think all humans have a soft spot or something human-like, because, well, they're human.
ERIC:
-Woah, he's hot! XD
-love his personality! He's so realistic and I'd be his friend. Heck, I want to marry him!
-OKay, thing is, you said he's an ENTJ. I think ENTJ's enjoy routine and aren't usually late. They also tend to be overly bossy, which is not the vibe I'm getting from him. You could change his Myers-Briggs, but it's not a big deal. Myers-Briggs isn't everything, but if you wanted him to be ENTJ, make him a little bossier, sort of like Rebecca, lol she seems bossy. Also, make him more headstrong.
Overall, he's great! I like him, a LOT, but you already know that :)
DAPHNE:
-ohhhh she's pretty!! I feel like she looks interesting. UGH, I want to see her irl!!
-Alright! I guessed right away that she's an INTP! :)
-Besides being smart, logical, and closed, add something odd or interesting. She's too bythebookINTP. You get what I mean? It seems that's she's an exact INTP like, she came straight from the website. She's human and not just her Myers-Briggs, remember that.
You did an amazing job with your characters! They're all realistic, have great backstories, and seem like actual people you'd get to know. I like them all and I want to marry Eric:)
Hope this helped!