I will critique your characters, and you guys can critique my half-formed characters and story. Win win! I am not that good at seeing what’s wrong, but other people can critique here too, so it shouldn’t be problematic at all!
(Side note: please avoid swearing in posts here, as swear words really bother me. Just a personal preference.)
Peter Parker This is my idea for a Spider-Man fanfic. Most of these ideas I just brainstormed. So read the notes and powers section mostly.
Okay so my main advice with this is how you are presenting it, but that isn’t very important. My advice would be to write it not like a fan fic spider man, but as if this was an original, get what I’m saying? Anyway, there is also a lot of categories missing, so maybe fill those in too. Besides that, i think you have a pretty solid character build. Just keep working on him!
Here is my character. She is a goddess from my story, but i didn’t want to have to pay or anything to get the deity outline, so this is what I’m stuck with. I like many opinions on this, so if someone has already critiqued it by the time you read this then feel free to critique it as well.
Oh yeah that was the idea from the start. Not even kidding I'm doing the origin and everything. So advice for if you wanna get more details out just use the notes section. Maybe the name The Star Kat could be used for comedy. Like she could say she doesn't like the name but it stuck. I like the visual ideas tho.