@Wheeze_For_Me
If you give me some feedback on my two characters, Kassie & Killian, then if you want i’ll give some feedback for some of your characters.
forum
Can you please help me?
Started by
@Wheeze_For_Me
tune
people_alt
43 followers
@Wheeze_For_Me
Invalid Character - Kassie
@Wheeze_For_Me
Invalid Character - Killian
@HighPockets group
I'd love to, but you have them on Private :(
Go into their profiles and click the symbol that looks like an unfinished triangle laying on its side, and then change them to Public, and I'll try to get to them by the end of the week!
@Wheeze_For_Me
I'd love to, but you have them on Private :(
Go into their profiles and click the symbol that looks like an unfinished triangle laying on its side, and then change them to Public, and I'll try to get to them by the end of the week!
They are fine now. I just didn’t know how to make them public for a little bit.
.png)
@Fangirl616 group
Okay, a couple things on Kass.
One: Pretty sure that race means elf, dwarf, etc. And you would put 'white' under skin tone.
Two: On the favorite weapon, does she have a preference in guns? Pistol, rifle, etc. And if so, does she a have a favorite out of those? 11mm, AK-47, etc. Does she have a favorite brand of gun? These are some things that might make her more realistic.
Three: On the favorite food, is it /all/ berries? What kind is her favorite?
Four: Waitress? Where does she work specifically? A Five star restaurant or a run down diner?
Five: Does strawberry red mean red-head, or bright red?
One last add on: Details. Make everything as detailed as you can. They are an elaborate person, and you need to show that.
Thats all from me. Hope this helps!
@Wheeze_For_Me
Okay, a couple things on Kass.
One: Pretty sure that race means elf, dwarf, etc. And you would put 'white' under skin tone.
Two: On the favorite weapon, does she have a preference in guns? Pistol, rifle, etc. And if so, does she a have a favorite out of those? 11mm, AK-47, etc. Does she have a favorite brand of gun? These are some things that might make her more realistic.
Three: On the favorite food, is it /all/ berries? What kind is her favorite?
Four: Waitress? Where does she work specifically? A Five star restaurant or a run down diner?
Five: Does strawberry red mean red-head, or bright red?
One last add on: Details. Make everything as detailed as you can. They are an elaborate person, and you need to show that.
Thats all from me. Hope this helps!
By strawberry red I mean the colour of strawberries.