forum Can you guys critique my character?

Started May 01, 2018 by @Oniyuri

tune

I'd like to know how I can improve making her cause I tend to struggle with this particular character a lot.

I think its private but I’d love to help!

Oh!! Sorry about that! It should be public now

Okey dokey!

I like her! I’m sure she’s fully mapped out in your head, but you didn’t put much down, so I’ll work with what I’ve got :)

1. Her nickname is Egypt but her name is nothing like that… just curious as to how that may have come about :)
2. What species is she? Are all of her people like her? Or is she the only one?
3. Background. She intrigues me, and I’d like to know more :)