Hey! Uh, I'm super new here and I would like if someone could help me with my main character. It's the first time I'm doing this so I don't know what could I add to her. Basically, I need someone to critique her and give me some advice in making characters, specially interesting villains.
Here is the link to my girl Amelia
(I dunno if it's working it's my first time doing this wkdkakdk)
Alsooo there may have some grammatical errors because my first language isn't english so yeah sorry about that (And I did this at 03:00 AM and was pratically desolusional at that time)
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Okay, is there anything specific you want advice on?
You mentioned a villain. A good villain falls can fall into several categories. Let me describe them.
Anti-Hero: Someone who does bad things to achieve a good goal. An example would be Deadpool.
Twisted hero: Someone who believes them self to be a hero, and is others possibly think the same of them.
Psychotic: Someone who is insane. What is their goal? They don't know. They just cause chaos for the sake of chaos.
Hope this helps!
Oh, I think she is more of an anti-hero type. I will do some research about it now that you mentioned it! Thanks :D
Also I don't know if her motives are good enough to create an interesting plot to the story and if her backstory is cliche or not. Also I don't know if something on her personality contradicts with other things previously said
not all anti-heroes are villains, though. Han Solo and Wolverine are both considered anti-heroes
Ok, I'll keep that in mind, thanks!
(Also, after reading your username I thought for the first time about something I should have thought a long time ago: pjo in a hp au. Thank you, you just expanded my mind)
She’s really good! But, maybe add her middle name in.
Ok, I'll think of one for her! Thanks!