forum Can someone critique my character?

Started August 05, 2018 by RandomWeirdOne

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Her name is Ashlynn and she is a main character so I want her to be as real as possible.

hey do you have it on public or private? It says I can't view the character.

@Suspicious_Reptiles
I have fixed the problem and in should work now. Sorry I took so long.

*Ashlynn
-Looks
What do you mean by average weight and height? Does she have shorter hair like a bob cut, or long hair down her back? Just wondering, but where did she get the scar on her face?
-Nature
For her mannerisms, what does she do when she's in different moods? Does she have any other motivations?
-Social
Does she just not have a religion? Does she believe in anything?Why are those her favorite Items?
-History
What MRPAST?

@Suspicious_Reptiles
Thanks for the feedback. I will edit those parts. :)