forum Can anyone critique these two characters for me?? Please/Thank you

Started January 08, 2019 by @breezy_boo

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They're set to private, I can't get to them.

Sorry, I thought I had changed that It's changed now. Sorry about that:)

Don't worry, it happens.

I have to say I really like Briella. She has similar problems to one of my characters and myself. Most of her fears and motivations are very relatable. All in all shes a good character.

Jackson is almost as relatable as Briella. I like how at the top of both of their Motivations is the desire to be a better parent. That's what every parent wants. All in all, your characters are very human and relatable.

When I say that Jackson isn't as relatable as Briella, I mean he's not as relatable to me myself. He's pretty relatable to go-getters like my brother and father.

@CurtisFamWriters thank you:) . I based Briella off of one of my close friends. I struggled a little with Jackson seeing as if I don't know much about guys, but I see it worked out good. Thank you for the critique!:)

You're welcome!