forum Can anyone critic this character?

Started August 10, 2018 by Gigi

tune

Hey, so this character is just someone from the dance group my main character is in, so i've left it pretty brief. Since I'm not done with the rest of the characters, no one is connected yet, but still. Thanks!

Hey! First of all, I love that you gave your character acne, that's something i haven't seen yet and it gives him a nice pinch of realism in his design! Also, I'm not sure how you want to portray this character, but because of his adversity to modernity and paranoia, added on with his kind of OCD tendencies to control other's body tapping, I think he can easily become a very annoying character, especially since the only positive traits combating these are "he's outgoing". I think that will all come down to how you write him, and how he ends up interacting with the people around him, but from what I see here, I would tread his personality with a taste of caution. Lovely character overall!