forum Are my Characters Believable?
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tune

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These are my 3 main characters, and I was wondering if they're developed enough and believable. Do they seem like they could all get along well as best friends?

@mika

hey hi howdy
i fully support them. they are my children. i love ALL of these boys. what a time.
anyway, they seem like people i could get along with in person. (wonder why)

FromBonesToDust

They seem to be really good guy ! And I'm so much interested by how Haiden died ! Whenever you've posted this story, please tell where I can find it.
Moreover, I like the fact that you use different sexual orientation for your character, even if Daxon seems a bit stereotyped (wears only colorful clothes, always happy etc.), but I hope you'll know how to use those choices to be different from what we see in like every movie or book.
I think you could trie to be more imaginative with Haiden, he can be a very mysterious and complicated character but he seems really simple just as you say it, like he doesn't want to talk about his depression because he is afraid to look weak ? I don't buy it. When someone is depressed, either he doesn't know it and that way, yes, he acts always as he thinks it's normal to act. Or he knows it and just… You know, starts to disappear, doesn't want to move from his house and all. And I know people are very complicated and different so react differently, but him thinking to look weak, really no. At least, he doesn't want to speak about it because he thinks no one care, because he thinks that it's no big deal because he doesn't matter…
The first character is in the other hand really well worked ;)
Hope i helped you !;)

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@FromBonesToDust

Thank you so much! I'll send you the link once I get the story started!