forum Another Character Critique!

Started February 07, 2018 by @mistress-0f-n0ne

tune

Hi! I made a new character. Well, actually I've had her for a while. I couldn't place her in any of my universes since she doesn't necessarily fit in any of them. But here goes nothing

Hi! I read through your character! She seems strong, independent, and a thinker. I like her!

You could give her a soft spot. It's not necessarily a weakness like being cold or pessimistic, more like something you don't see when you first meet her but slowly find out about her. Something she reveals about herself as she evolves in your story. Maybe she's fiercely loyal to someone and would die for them?

Hope this helped!

Thank you so much for the advice! With this format it makes it a bit harder to show all sides of your character. I usually think of it as first impressions here. But again thank you it is helpful

could you elaborate a bit on her weapon, Claymore?

That is the type of sword it is. A scottish claymore.