forum Angelica lauss version 2.37 would anyone Critique?

Started February 08, 2018 by @Paperok

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round 2.37

I love the background! Could you please elaborate more on who the parents were trying to sacrifice Angel to?

Yeah I should specify but it's the same god they were sacrificing the animals to, Ahlderag

The background is soooo much better!!! I love it! (It's also pretty realistic since I had a friend who had a similar experience with religious parents –err, minus the sacrifice part!) The only thing I see that is still a bit shaky is her flaw. She only has one, and it's not really a personality flaw. It's good and makes a lot of sense, but maybe add one or two more. Is she short-tempered, or a pushover, or rude? Otherwise, great job! She's awesome.

@writelikeyourerunningoutoftime your constant reviews of Angelica keeping me up with what is lacking I truly appreciate it :) ever want me to repay you just @ me