@IzudekuMidoriya
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@Shadow_Knight group
(May I join this? I have a spooky dimension traveling child.)
@IzudekuMidoriya
(I don't mind)
@ElderGodSwimwithGamers group
" I saw… a fire. I think that is when you became alone." Hinata sighed.
"I hate life."
You do not.
"Yes, I do."
@ElderGodSwimwithGamers group
"Don't you hate it when you get in an argument with your characters?"
@ElderGodSwimwithGamers group
"Be quiet SG!"
@IzudekuMidoriya
"A….Fire" Lulu thought really hard about this
@Darkblossom group
"A….Fire" Lulu thought really hard about this
(Can I give you some writing advice?)
@Darkblossom group
(There is something that I notice you are doing that is easy to fix)
@IzudekuMidoriya
(What I will take advice)
@Darkblossom group
(If you use proper punctuation at all times, commas, periods, etc. then you seem less like a six year old and more like someone who knows what their doing. I mean this with no offense)
@IzudekuMidoriya
(no no I know I don't use proper punctuations sorry I know how to it's just I don't use them I will be better at it sorry about it)
@Darkblossom group
(It’s okay no need to apologize. I just noticed that your characters all seem like children when you don’t use punctuation.)
@Shadow_Knight group
A giggle came from the ceiling. There was a girl. She looked about 14-15 and was sitting on the ceiling. She had freakishly long light gray hair that covered her eyes and long grey robes that covered almost every inch of her body. The robe sleeves flopped over her hands. "You are a bunch of misfits, aren't you?" She asked chuckling, holding a hand over her mouth.
@IzudekuMidoriya
"Um…Yes, I guess so," Lulu says nervously
@Shadow_Knight group
She turned her head towards Lulu. "Ahh! A demon!" She mused hoping off the 'ceiling' and onto the floor. She started to walk over to Lulu.
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Zack glanced up from his pretzel with a snicker. "You're curious of just one Demon? Well, there's two, you know," The man said sassily from his little area away fom the others.
@Shadow_Knight group
(I meant for it to be like a curious thing and not scared. Sorry if that confused you!)
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(oh lol I can fix it.)
@Shadow_Knight group
Her head snapped over to the other demon. "I know! But your not scared like this one." She said pointing at Lulu. "Fear is such a weird thing, isn't it?"
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"Fear makes you do stupid shit, that's for sure," Zack sighed, biting into the pretzel again.
@Darkblossom group
Madi grimaced slightly as Zack spoke.
“Oh. Your one of those characters. Huh.” She went back to her book.
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"What the hell do you mean by that?" He asked, sounding exasperated. She's probably one of those know-it-all characters.
@Darkblossom group
“You cuss.” Madi says this without looking up from her book.
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"And?" He rolled his eyes, tucking his legs into his chest. "I don't think I, out of all species of race on the planet, would care."