The title says it all. I don't have a plot, but if you do, that's cool. If you don't, then I can always come up with something.
A few things though:
- andrew (Our Supreme Lord and Overseer)'s rules apply, no discussions.
- I am not a beginner. I'm just looking to help someone who is.
- You'll have to be fine with me talking about some errors you make like spelling or grammar. I may come off as harsh, but I'm not doing it to be mean, I'm doing it to help you improve. So please listen to me.
- I will give you small writing tips if I feel it to be necessary.
- No slurs or shit like that.
- Lgbtq+ welcome, though don't feel pressured to have a non-cishet character.
- This does not have to be romance.
- Despite this being for a beginner, I will ask that two put at least 2-3 semi-decent sentences in your reply. I'm not looking for Leo Tolstoy material. I'm just looking for a little effort.
- Don't be afraid to ask me questions!
- I will point out if your character is OP, a Mary Sue, excessively edgy, or something else of the like. Your character can have flaws, but I don't want a character that's all "no one loves me, my parents died, i've been to an insane asylum 7 timez, society made me this way, umu i wanna dieeee". No. Just no.
- Let me know if you have any triggers!
That's all, I think. Don't be shy! :D
@kiba
C'mere. It seems like you have a lot to learn.
Okay, so my first question for you before we begin. Are you older than twelve? I don't want to have too high of an expectation for you.
Alright. So. Do you have a plot in mind (you know what a plot is, right?)? Or even just a genre?
genre…oh i guess adventure…sorry
That's just fine. May I have a sample of something you've written (in prose) to see what I'm working with? Don't apologize unnecessarily, by the way.
Maka ''She's dead Raiujji!''….
Raiujji ''…T-thats not true!!''
ugh…my skills suck …
I-
Yeah, we've got a lot of work. Hmm. This… scene seems to be heavily out of context, but that isn't the problem here. In that dialogue, I noticed a lack of comma usage where needed and the same with an apostrophe. That, and, in my opinion, this was just written poorly.
Do you perhaps have a paragraph of your work?
unfortunately no…i spend more tie drawing than writing…
Well, let's do this. So that I can assess your abilities a little better, I want you to write a small sample (like five sentences at least) showing the reaction of one of your characters when they find a dead body. Does that make sense?
Good grief. Does it make sense or not?
(Hey, @MosisIsWorkingOnMakingABook. Is this person a friend of yours? I'm slightly curious.)
(Nope. I just found them. I thought I could help.)
Hi, I used to come on here a lot about 2 years ago, but I had to take a break from the website. My writing skills have downgraded a lot and I just need lots of practice and obviously this website has changed a lot since I've been here last, do you mind?
Oh. Hello, @I_Dont_know_who_I_Am! Im sorry to say that @myosotis has been offline for about a month. I believe they said they'll be off for about two so one more month. But I'd be glad to? All up to you!
Of course, I'd be glad to! Any ideas?
Yes. May we talk this out in PM's?
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