Worldbuilding:
Sethu is a youngish deity, coming into existence about 400 years ago. They generally had a good relationship with most of the other deity’s but some of the older ones saw them as childish and dismissed them. Sethu wanted to become part of the Board when their knowledge was more advanced and they had finished the education system. Their best friend was Horas.
Around 700 years ago the Deitys ruined the Daenma due to a mass war. Many Deities became stuck on Daenma. The Daenmas blame the deitys for all the damage that took place during the massacre and will now attempt to kill them on sight because of rage and anger. Some deity’s that took part in the war left weapons behind, this gave Daenmas the ability to kill Deity’s. The deitys that got stuck on Daenma had to hide . Sethu has to stay undercover and keep their deity positiona secret, but they are doing a terrible job because they have been miserable since their banishment.
Fixed plot hole 1 - There is a sacred rule that Deity’s are not allowed to use their powers to cause harm to any living being that is not another Deity. This rule came into place after the Massacre of Daenma due to the horrific destruction of society.
Opening line as the ending? -
Sethu was disgrased and banished to Daenma because the Board belives they are guilty of attempted and successful murder of two deitys. They didn’t actually commit these crimes but they were framed and they want to find a way back to Kalbuzia They were sent on their own but Horas snuck out and joined them on Darmia.
Sethu has to figure out a way to prove they didnt kill the deity while still on Daenma. They try to connect anyone to the day of the murder but it all leads to blanks. They finally give up while Horas tries to cheer them up.
Once getting to Daenma Sethu has to keep their position a secret Sethu in an alleyway being all sad and miserable, Sethu feels something watching them but doesnt move. A black cat walks up to them and comforts them. After a while Sethu says, 'Are you okay there little buddy? You look pretty banged up'. They sighed while placing their hand on the cat. “No-one wanted either of us huh?” “You know i wonder if anyone truly believed me. I’d like to to tell you they did, but then you i would be lying to myself as much as i would be to you.” The cat curled up next to Sethu’s leg, glancing up at them “Do you have a name?”, the cat stared at him, as if to say no. “Maybe I’ll call you ____.” They pushed themselves off the ground and turned to leave. Just before they walked away Sethu heard soft steps following them.
Just as Sethu is about to ride home they get stopped by a person franticly asking if they can get on the back of the motorcycle. They tell Sethu to 'Hurry up!'. Insert panic chase scene.
Introduce Conflict - They explain their name is Kek and someones trying to kill them. Kek explains that any deity found living in Daenma wold be give a bounty and killed on sight. Sethu was to young to remember the war and it was such a dark secret that nobody ever told him. Kek has a bounty on their head and if Sethu doesnt stop acting so suspicous they will too soon. Before mortals were unable to kill deitys but they suddenly have possessions of Angelic weapons, capable of killing the deity's.
Kek has a special connection with the cat and asks for refuge with Sethu.
Kek takes Sethu and Horas to a place where other deity’s are taking refuge, (introduce new human character that actually likes deity’s , contrast to outer world). Introduce 3 other characters including Alydwn, found family tropes. Aldywn has a love interest. Younger child character Kek them explains to Sethu that they have been together for a while and they all go stuck here since the massacre of Daenma.
Scene where Sethu freaks out about the people trying to kill them and we get a nice friendship moment between Sethu and Kek, building a desperate relationship.
Daenma authorities find the camp (unknown reason) Vague dialogue links to the twisted fountain. The group is forced to run from ___ but at some point along the story they get split up and only Kek, Sethu, Horas and the human character.
Conflict - human character reveals they were originally was a spy for the authorities but the longer they spent with them the more they changed their mind. human character asks to go with them and they promise not to disclose any more locations but it’s too late. The human character tries to run but get shot in the back . Sethu is forced to choose between endangering their friends by staying with them or leaving them to keep them safe. Sethu decides to leave but the cat goes with them.
Twist - The one who framed Sethu is also behind the people trying to kill them. Both Kek and Sethu assumed it was his deity-status that was the reason but someone or somthing much more sinister wanted him dead. One of the 'Board' members was secretly apart of an organisation that wants to keep deitys pure and erdicated any 'sinful magic', such as chaos.
Conflict fight scene between Sethu, Kek, Horas and the other deitys apart of the 'Tainted Fountain'. Kek is killed in cold blood. Sethu filled with rage loses control of their power and warns the other deity that they wont stop bringing chaos into Daenma and creating a second massacre unless they bring them back to Kalbuzia.
Sethu going back to Kalbuzia was a trap the 'Tainted Fountain' spread to enough Board members.Rene was one of original members of the Tainted Fountain and was part of the plan to disgrace and kill Sethu. Another one of the Board members helps the tainted fountain but didn’t realise they actually wanted to kill deity’s, they thought the tainted fountain only wanted to banish people from Kalbuzia. They realise this and gets silence by a Tainted Fountain member (not killed). Insert big evil villain speech. Sethu was sent to the Void, a place where time was meaningless.
Final line maybe. ''and inside its lonely, no soul could imagine the true emptiness felt inside the Void, some are here for a week, others years, but you? You're never coming out".