You just got vectored
I'm going to feed you to my tarantula! That is, if they're hungry. Consider yourself lucky if my tarantula already ate today.
Speaking of which, you're probably wondering why you bother to read this if it's not even a fanfiction. "That is an excellent question," I told myself as I was typing this. Thing is, it's pretty funny to ask people their critique on writing, only to discover they've been vectored when they glance at the title.
I just need to make a couple of more paragraphs to make this look believable at first glance. You don't know how many people glimpse at things without reading the text. It's simply thrilling. Heh, did you see the Queen Scarlet reference I threw there?
Any Wings of Fire fans out there? During virtual, we played a game in band where we had to play some song for as long as possible. If we got lost, we had to stop playing and turn off our cameras. After the game, our band teacher wanted to rate the game from 1 to 10. I rated it 10 and tried to summon any WoF fans out there by commenting "9/10. The game 'Last Person Standing' was very thrilling. I also liked how you played all of the parts."
Either nobody got the reference and was somewhat creeped out or they got the reference but didn't know how to respond. Nevertheless, I didn't manage to summon any WoF fans. How sad.
Anyways, if you managed to read this far, congrats! Great job reading through my rambling :-V (If you just skipped to the end, then that was a very intelligent move of you)