forum (I want to do a camp rp because I’m bored.) Camp Willow Lake (Closed 8/8 yeet)

Started December 17, 2018 by Deleted user

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No, I said OG.//

Tonya patted the plushies head and whipped dirt off of it. “Yep… he’s my favorite character from the games… I have a Zelda plushing im my backpack along with a Ganondorf plushie… i got the three for Christmas.”
She waited patiently for him to start walking towards the sleeping area for her to grab her suitcase once again.

"Okay great! What's your favorite color? Animal? Do you have siblings?" He asked, his extroverted nature taking over as he asked about the younger girl.

Abigail walked over to a small group of people. She stood to the side and watched them conversing. She didn't want to be here but she had no choice, so faking a smile was what she was planning on doing during her stay.

“My favorite color is Lilac… I don’t really have a favorite animal but I love guinea pigs and cats… I have a brother named John… he’s 26 and visits from time to time to play some video games with me…”
Tonya began to grow more nervous by the questions, she tried not to burst out into tears from the anxiety building inside of her. She didn’t know what to do so she stood there not moving at all.

Abigail walked over to a small group of people. She stood to the side and watched them conversing. She didnt want to be here but she had no choice, so a faking a smile was what she was planning on doing during her stay.

(*Didn’t
So a faking a smile makes no sense. Remove the a after so.)

Sarah walked over to Alex "You're doing it again Alex. Can't you see she's uncomfortable." She waved to tonya "You must be the new girl. Hi! I'm Sarah," she said with a smile

Sarah walked over to Alex "You're doing it again Alex. Can't you see she's uncomfortable." She waved to tonya "You must be the new girl. Hi! I'm Sarah," she said with a smile

(There should be a period after the first Alex, and a question mark after uncomfortable, Tonya isn’t capitalized, put a period after Tonya because you are starting a new sentence, you forgot the period at the end of the paragraph.)

Sarah walked over to Alex. "You're doing it again Alex. Can't you see she's uncomfortable." She waved to Tonya "You must be the new girl. Hi! I'm Sarah," she said with a smile.

(Thank you!)

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Sarah walked over to Alex. "You're doing it again Alex. Can't you see she's uncomfortable." She waved to Tonya "You must be the new girl. Hi! I'm Sarah," she said with a smile.

Tonya nervously held out her hand. “I-I’m Tonya… it’s nice to meet you…”
She held her plushie tightly, as if it was a stress ball. “Um… can we go to the sleeping area now…?”

"I can take you. I doubt Alex will get around to that," she said staring at him. "Anyways. Let's get going!'' She starts heading to the sleeping area motioning for Tonya to follow.

Tonya followed her, shaking as she walked as usual. Her suitcase rolled behind her as she heard stuff bouncing. “Do you know if we have roommates?”
(Lol they do, just putting it there because why not. A cabin has four beds, and since there’s only 8 people I thought it would be great. The camp counselors sleep in a separate cabin. So technically there are 3 cabins but one of them doesn’t have 2 people… because there’s technically only 6. If you’re bothered by that well then I don’t care. I’m just throwing random details that you probably don’t care about.)

"Yes, there are roommates. Sorry if that's making you uncomfortable," she said with a nervous laugh "I'm sure they'll be here soon…"

"Yes, there are roommates. Sorry if that's making you uncomfortable," she said with a nervous laugh. "I'm sure they'll be here soon…”

Tonya looked up, finally not having her eyes locked onto the ground. The cabins looked like a nice white modern home, she saw it had air conditioning which she was happy about. It was rectangle shaped and was two times her size in height. She walked over to it and opened the door, a brush of cold air hit her face. She walked inside, shivering in her fur boots and walked over to a cot, this cot was right beside the AC. She placed her suitcase on the ground and zipped it open. She took out her Ganondorf and Zelda plushie, a Kirby themed bedsheet, her Kirby themed pillow case, and a heavy blanket that was also Kirby themed. She set up the bed and neatly put the three plushies on the bed, then she sat down. She looked around the cabin, it was empty without her stuff, only four cots, and nothing more. She zipped the suitcase shut and slipped it under the cot, then went outside meeting back up with Sarah.

(Sorry in a hurry…I'm in class.)

(Don’t worry about it. Just stay focused in class THEN reply. It’s better this way because then your focus will be on Notebook instead of class work.)

Milo stood at the front gates to the camp. He glared at his parents as they drove away. Silently cursing the aunt that mentioned the camp to his parents, Milo entered the camp.