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(Actually I have a character who's not really good as a passenger but more of an inventor that I planned on using, could I still use them?)
(Actually I have a character who's not really good as a passenger but more of an inventor that I planned on using, could I still use them?)
(hmmm…..idk I guess? Depends on if you intended him to be part of the crew…)
Odin ran quickly through the mental checklist. He nodded in the direction of Lars, giving him a thumbs up.
Lars nodded in return and grabbed the wheel eagerly. "Good to go then Ms. Vick?"
(hmmm…..idk I guess? Depends on if you intended him to be part of the crew…)
(Her, and yeah she would be in the crew.)
(I'd have to see her bio)
(Then no. No inventor)
(I meant she's a computer programmer. And a freelance journalist.)
(I'd have to see her bio)
(I could show it to you soon, but I'm on and off)
(Okay then I'll wait)
(Okay I have some concerns
Just some things I noted)
Lars nodded in return and grabbed the wheel eagerly. "Good to go then Ms. Vick?"
“Perfect-o!” Victoria called from the loading bay. “Wheels up in 5!” (Is that ok?)
(Okay I have some concerns
- I really don't want alcohol involved
- Her looks are kind of Mary Sue-ish
- We don't need a computer specialist
Just some things I noted)
Right, I can redo it.
(Yeah that's fine)
Lars peered out the front. No signs of pursuit. "Anytime now Vick!"
“Alright! We’re in the air!”
Lars giggled and jerked the wheel up. The ship jolted and slowly rose.
Neku gripped the armrests. "Takeoff is hetarhik." He muttered.
"It's a what now?"
"Stressful. At least that's what I think it means."
"Hectic? Or heart-attack…." Lars swerved around another ship.
"No no, it's a word from my home language. I think." Neku suppressed a squeal of anxiety as they swerved around the other ship.
“Calm down, hon,” Victoria smiled, descending into the ship’s belly/her workspace. “We’re fine.”
Lars leaned forward as they broke through the atmosphere. He pressed the autopilot button and sat back. "Wow that was fun!"
"How can I be calm when Lars drives like crazy?" Neku muttered.
"Because even when I'm crazy, I've got it under control." He pulled a sucker from his pocket and popped it into his mouth.
Neku groaned.
(What were they loading onto the ship?)
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