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//update on the characters - I think Maddie is the only one who’s been near completely reworked, so there’s that :/
//update on the characters - I think Maddie is the only one who’s been near completely reworked, so there’s that :/
So I've mentioned this before, but Maddie is already a character in a book I'm writing. That is why I had all of the wonderland rules that I kept bringing up along with the fate speech. Soo…um… I don't want to be mean or selfish, but I would prefer that you don't use Maddie as base for another character.
I am sorry, especially since you have put work into reworking her already, but she is my character so maybe if you sent me the details about your version of Maddie and maybe I can ok them or veto them. Would that be alright?
Oh, yeah, of course! She has a page on my profile, just let me open it up to public and then I can send the link to you
if yall want, we can reboot this? but with a completly different plot?
Yeah, that would be great. I would love to reboot this again.
YEs
Why not.
//hELLS YEA
Let’s discuss a plot in here then I’ll make a new one ok?
I'm up for another try at this
Sounds good
So what should we plan out as the plot? I’d like to keep the parents kidnaping and the ending the same if that’s alright?
(Wait.
We had an ending???)
There was a planed ending thing where we fought one of the bothers Grimm
(Well no one really told us anything about the original plot…….)
There was a planed ending thing where we fought one of the bothers Grimm
(Oh that. .-.)
//I mean, probably parents missing and we know where we’re headed so we don’t have to plot hill the entire thing?
(Or we could change the entire plot? But I didn’t tell the entire plot because I wanted to see how it would work out.)
//okay, well let’s figure out a villain first
So my original idea for the reboot was to have the brothers Grimm as omnipotent beings, with all power over the universe, and their goal is to create the perfect story in the universe. In this process they create a being called the Grimm, which overpowers them immensely leaving them to become mere mortals, the Grimm then begins to follow the Brothers original goal, creating the perfect story.
That sounds v interesting. :O
Intriguing, I don't really have much to offer other than when I think about it. What lead the other incarnations to die was that most of us did not have goal really to work towards so we just progressively became more chaotic the further we went and eventually derailed the story to the point of no return. Yes we had a big over arching goal find our parents, but we might need more of a mile stone layout to keep the characters (and us) focused. I'm not sure if the helps at all or if I'm compliantly out of line.
So what we need is a skeleton to build around?
hey we’re Frankenstein now, building a body :D
(Time to get s p o o k y .)
//it’s s p o o p y time
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